IELTS Writing Task 1 

18. You work in an office and have recently been experiencing a health problem. You think that the problem started because of the working conditions in the office. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter

• describe the health problem

• explain why you think it was caused by conditions in the office

• suggest what the manager should do to improve the working conditions in the office 

Sample Answer 1

Band 6

Dear Sir,

                      I am extremely sorry to say that I am very disappointed with the hectic schedule provided by your company, which is quite difficult for my fitness.

                       I have been working for a reputed company called 'Toyota' for the last two years as one of the loyal members of the clerical staff. But a couple of months ago, I noticed that I had been suffering from a serious health issue called obesity due to the sedentary lifestyle in the office. I have to work continuously on a computer screen for eight hours, and sometimes I have to work extra working hours, resulting in an adverse effect on my health. I have gained 12 kg of extra fat in the last two months, causing a concerning problem for me. 

                         Therefore, I would like to make a kind suggestion to provide the facilities for a gym so that I can recover from my health issues and stay fit, and I can give my best result. The gym would be open by freeing up the basement area, which has not been used for the last several years.

                               I look forward to hearing from you.

                             Thank you in advance.

Yours sincerely,

Priya Choudhary

200 Words

Ms Priya Chaudhary

Student

Vishal IELTS Institute

Edited and Corrected by

 Dr Vishal Goyal