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Task-2

Let's Learn from Others' Mistakes

Common Errors 

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Source: Ms Falguni Nanda  MT 06

Original Text

Education plays an instrumental role, worldwide. 

Corrected

Corrected version:

Education plays an instrumental role worldwide. 

Explanation: 

No need of comma before worldwide.

Improved

Improved version:

Education profoundly shapes the global landscape. 

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Original Text

Schools and colleges are the basic buildining institutions of human life. 

Corrected

Corrected version:

Schools and colleges are the basic building institutions of human life.

Explanation: 

"Buildining" is a misspelling; the correct word is "building."

Improved

Improved version:

Educational institutions, namely schools and colleges, form the very bedrock of human existence.

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 Original Text

They provide us our life and many opportunities needed for our future, ambitions and goals.

Corrected

Corrected version:

They provide us with our life and many opportunities needed for our future, ambitions, and goals.

Explanation: 

The corrected sentence adds the missing preposition "with" and uses commas to separate the items in the list ("ambitions" and "goals").

Improved

Improved version:

These institutions not only mold our lives but also unlock myriad opportunities essential for the pursuit of our future aspirations and objectives. 

4

Original Text

Whereas, many people have their own opinions in favour and against of it.

Corrected

Corrected version:

However, many people have their own opinions in favour of and against it.

Explanation: 

"Whereas" is replaced with "However" for better sentence flow, and "of" is placed after "favour" for correct usage.

Improved

Improved version:

Nevertheless, diverse opinions persist, with some advocating for and others opposing this pivotal establishment 

5

Original Text

Providing knowledege is not only important for childrens, but it is also beneficial for learners, who wants to learn at old age also.

Corrected

Corrected version:

Providing knowledge is not only important for children but is also beneficial for learners who want to learn at an old age as well. 

Explanation:

Corrected the spelling of "knowledge," changed "childrens" to "children," and adjusted the phrasing for clarity.

Improved

Improved version:

The imparting of knowledge holds immense significance, catering not only to children but also to lifelong learners. Knowledge remains an invaluable asset in countless dimensions. 

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Original Text

Realising the fact that they instilled in us the foundation of higher education as well as the discipline we need for our success later in life, it can be stated with safety that this system should continue.

Corrected

Corrected version:

Realising the fact that they instilled in us the foundation of higher education as well as the discipline we need for our success later in life, it can be stated with confidence that this system should continue. 

Explanation: 

Replaced "safety" with "confidence" for better word choice and clarity.

Improved

Improved version:

Acknowledging that educational establishments furnish us with the cornerstones of higher learning and the discipline requisite for future triumphs, we can confidently affirm the necessity of their continued existence. 

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Original Text

Secondly, discipline and punctuality, we learn there are necessary.

Corrected

Corrected version:

Secondly, discipline and punctuality are what we learn as necessary.

Explanation: 

Corrected the sentence structure for clarity and added "are what we learn" to convey the idea clearly.

Improved

Improved version:

Discipline and punctuality are inculcated from inception, endowing us with the ability to uphold these virtues perpetually. 

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Original Text

No other part of life teaches us to respect the time the way, our schools have taught us. 

Corrected

Corrected version:

No other part of life teaches us to respect time the way our schools have taught us.


Explanation: 

Removed the unnecessary comma and "the" before "time" for improved grammar.

Improved

Improved version:

Few other facets of existence nurture such a profound respect for time as our educational institutions do. 

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Original Text

It actually moulds us to be punctual and committed from the very beginning, so, we can follow it forever.

Corrected

Corrected version:

It actually moulds us to be punctual and committed from the very beginning, so we can follow it forever.

Explanation: 

Removed the unnecessary comma after "so" for proper punctuation. 

Improved

Improved version:

It actively instils in us the virtues of punctuality and unwavering commitment, equipping us to embrace these qualities indefinitely. 

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Original Text

Furthermore, I personally believe that academic teaching favours the student by adopting a systemic approach which can be replicated across all situations.

Corrected

Corrected version:

Furthermore, I personally believe that academic teaching favours the student by adopting a systematic approach that can be replicated across all situations.

Explanation: 

Replaced "systemic" with "systematic" for the correct word choice.

Improved

Improved version:

Moreover, I wholeheartedly contend that academic instruction uniquely favours students by embracing a systematic approach that can be universally applied across all circumstances. 

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Original Text

Practical experience often negatively biases certain students, for instance, a hairdressing trainee may only be tasked with a particular type of haircut since this is the only one demanded by the customers. 

Corrected

Corrected version:

Practical experience often negatively biases certain students. For instance, a hairdressing trainee may only be tasked with a particular type of haircut, since this is the only one demanded by the customers. 

Explanation: 

Split the sentence into two for better readability and added a comma after "haircut" for correct punctuation.

Improved

Improved version:

Practical experiences may occasionally engender biases in certain students. For instance, a trainee hairdresser might become proficient in a single haircut style due to customer demand. 

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Original Text

To conclude, Education and Learning is the most important and the basic part of the life, without this, we cannot live a healthy and stable life as knowledge plays an indispensible role till cold of nature.

Corrected

Corrected version:

In conclusion, education and learning are the most important and basic parts of life. Without them, we cannot live a healthy and stable life, as knowledge plays an indispensable role until the end of nature's course. 

Explanation: 

Corrected the subject-verb agreement ("is" to "are"), rephrased for clarity, and improved word choice.

Improved

Improved version:

In summation, education and learning stand as the most fundamental and indispensable facets of life. Their absence renders the pursuit of a healthy and stable life unattainable, as knowledge plays an enduring and irreplaceable role throughout the entirety of our existence. 

Source: Ms Falguni Nanda 25-09-23  MT 06

Original Text!

Education plays an instrumental role, worldwide. Schools and colleges are the basic buildining institutions of human life. They provide us our life and many opportunities needed for our future, ambitions and goals. Whereas, many people have their own opinions in favour and against of it.

Providing knowledege is not only important for childrens, but it is also beneficial for learners, who wants to learn at old age also. knowledge is still beneficial in multiple ways. Realising the fact that they instilled in us the foundation of higher education as well as the discipline we need for our success later in life, it can be stated with safety that this system should continue.

Secondly, discipline and punctuality, we learn there are necessary. No other part of life teaches us to respect the time the way, our schools have taught us. It actually moulds us to be punctual and committed from the very beginning, so, we can follow it forever. 

Furthermore, I personally believe that academic teaching favours the student by adopting a systemic approach which can be replicated across all situations. Practical experience often negatively biases certain students, for instance, a hairdressing trainee may only be tasked with a particular type of haircut since this is the only one demanded by the customers. Through academic teaching, school ensures that the student face all types of situation and document their material in such a way that students can easily review them at their own convenience.

To conclude, Education and Learning is  the most important and the basic part of the life, without this, we cannot live a healthy and stable life as knowledge plays an indispensible role till cold of nature.

Corrected!      

Education plays an instrumental role worldwide. Schools and colleges are the basic building institutions of human life. They provide us with our life and many opportunities needed for our future ambitions and goals. However, many people have their own opinions in favour of and against it.
    Providing knowledge is not only important for children, but it is also beneficial for learners who want to learn at an old age as well. Knowledge is still beneficial in multiple ways. Realising the fact that they instilled in us the foundation of higher education as well as the discipline we need for our success later in life, it can be stated with certainty that this system should continue.
     Secondly, discipline and punctuality, which we learn there, are necessary. No other part of life teaches us to respect time the way our schools have taught us. It actually moulds us to be punctual and committed from the very beginning, so we can follow it forever.
      Furthermore, I personally believe that academic teaching favours the student by adopting a systematic approach which can be replicated across all situations. Practical experience often negatively biases certain students. For instance, a hairdressing trainee may only be tasked with a particular type of haircut since this is the only one demanded by the customers. Through academic teaching, schools ensure that students face all types of situations and document their material in such a way that students can easily review them at their own convenience.
        In conclusion, education and learning are the most important and basic parts of life. Without them, we cannot live a healthy and stable life as knowledge plays an indispensable role until the end of our lives.

IMPROVED VERSION

     Education, as a pivotal force, exerts a profound influence on the global stage. It is the cornerstone upon which societies are built, with schools and colleges serving as its vital pillars. In this essay, we will explore the multifaceted role of education, its significance in shaping lives and futures, and the diverse perspectives that surround it.

       Education is a transformative force that shapes both individuals and nations; it is not merely a system. Schools and colleges, often regarded as the crucible of knowledge, serve as the basis for the development of human potential. They equip us with the knowledge and opportunities necessary to achieve our aspirations and objectives, constituting an integral part of our life journey. Although education is of the utmost importance, opinions regarding its effectiveness vary widely.

      One of the most important aspects of education is the dissemination of knowledge. This extends beyond childhood; education benefits learners throughout their lives. Knowledge is a versatile instrument that offers numerous advantages. It enables individuals to navigate a complex world, fosters critical thinking, and promotes personal and societal development. In a global landscape that is constantly evolving, knowledge remains an indispensable asset.

       Early on, educational institutions not only impart knowledge, but also instill discipline and punctuality. These values become ingrained, creating conscientious and responsible citizens. Schools and colleges teach us time management more effectively than any other aspect of life. Acquired in educational settings, punctuality and discipline frequently become lifelong habits that contribute to our success in various fields.

         In addition, academic instruction's systematic approach provides students with a distinct advantage. This method of structured learning can be applied to a variety of situations, thereby enhancing adaptability and problem-solving skills. In contrast, practical experiences may unintentionally prejudice some students by limiting their exposure to particular tasks. Due to customer demand, individuals in vocational training may become proficient in a limited range of skills.

         In conclusion, education, with its profound impact on individuals and society, is an essential element of our lives. Its influence goes far beyond the classroom, shaping our very existence. Although opinions on education may vary, its enduring significance is incontestable. Education equips us with the knowledge, discipline, and adaptability necessary for navigating a world that is constantly changing. It is a priceless asset that enriches our life experiences and enables us to live healthier, more stable lives.

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