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Task-1

Let's Learn from Others' Mistakes

Common Errors 

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Source: Ms Sakshi 10-07-23 MT 01

Original Text

Regarding in India, the growth rate of population figures increased dramatically from year 2000 to 2050. 

Corrected

Corrected version:

Regarding India, the growth rate of population figures increased dramatically from the year 2000 to 2050. 

Explanation: 

Removed the unnecessary "in" before "India" and added "the" before "year" to make the sentence grammatically correct.

Improved

Improved version:

Regarding India, the growth rate of its population witnessed a remarkable surge from 2000 to 2050. 

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Original Text

In 2000, the growth of population figures for India was one billion whereas in China the growth of population crosses 1.25 billions. 

Corrected

Corrected version:

In 2000, the population figures for India were one billion, whereas in China, the population figures crossed 1.25 billion. 

Explanation: 

Replaced "growth of population figures" with "population figures" for clarity. Made the verb agreement consistent by changing "was" to "were" and "crosses" to "crossed." Changed "billions" to "billion" to match the singular form of the number.

Improved

Improved version:

In 2000, India's population stood at one billion, while China's population exceeded 1.25 billion.

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Original Text

Additionally, in the year 2030, two countries India and China were at the same level in the growth rate of population and it was nearly about 1.44 billions. 

Corrected

Corrected version:

Additionally, in the year 2030, the two countries, India and China, had the same population growth rate, which was nearly about 1.44 billion.

Explanation: 

Added the article "the" before "two countries" for clarity. Replaced "level in the growth rate of population" with "population growth rate" for conciseness. Changed "it" to "which" to refer to the population growth rate. Replaced "billions" with "billion" for singular form.

Improved

Improved version:

Moreover, by the year 2030, both India and China had nearly reached the same population growth rate, reaching approximately 1.44 billion.

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Original Text

Turning to, in 2050, the population growth among two countries in which India crosses China and surged to a higher level upto 1.6 billions whereas population growth rate in China was predicted to 1.4 billions.

Corrected

Corrected version:

Turning to 2050, the population growth between the two countries, India and China, India surpassed China and reached a higher level of 1.6 billion, whereas the population growth rate in China was predicted to be 1.4 billion.

Explanation: 

Removed the comma after "Turning to" as it's not necessary. Replaced "among two countries" with "between the two countries" for clarity. Changed "in which" to "India" to clarify that India surpassed China. Replaced "surged to a higher level upto" with "reached a higher level of" for clarity and conciseness. Changed "billions" to "billion" for singular form. Added "be" before "predicted" for correct verb tense.

Improved

Improved version:

Looking ahead to 2050, India's population growth surpassed China, reaching a higher level of 1.6 billion, while China's population growth rate was predicted to reach 1.4 billion. 

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Original Text

To conclude, it seems that the overall population growth rate in India crosses the population growth rate of China and India was expected to at peak upto 1.6 billions.

Corrected

Corrected version:

In conclusion, it appears that the overall population growth rate in India exceeds that of China, and India was expected to peak at 1.6 billion. 

Explanation: 

Replaced "it seems that" with "it appears that" for a more certain statement. Changed "crosses" to "exceeds" for clarity. Removed "the" before "population growth rate of China" to make the sentence more concise. Replaced "was expected to at peak upto" with "was expected to peak at" for correct sentence structure. Changed "billions" to "billion" for singular form.

Improved

Improved version:

In conclusion, it is evident that India's overall population growth rate surpasses that of China, with India expected to peak at 1.6 billion inhabitants. 

Source: Ms Sakshi 10-07-23 MT 01

Original Text!

The presented line graph shows population figures for India and China from year 2000 and expected growth rate of population upto 2050 year. 

Regarding in India, the growth rate of population figures increased dramatically from year 2000 to 2050. In 2000, the growth of population figures for India was one billion whereas in China the growth of population crosses 1.25 billions. Additionally, in the year 2030, two countries India and China were at the same level in the growth rate of population and it was nearly about 1.44 billions.

Turning to, in 2050, the population growth among two countries in which India crosses China and surged to a higher level upto 1.6 billions whereas population growth rate in China was predicted to 1.4 billions. 

To conclude, it seems that the overall population growth rate in India crosses the population growth rate of China and India was expected to at peak upto 1.6 billions.

Corrected!

The presented line graph shows population figures for India and China from the year 2000 and the expected growth rate of the population up to the year 2050.

Regarding India, the growth rate of population figures increased dramatically from the year 2000 to 2050. In 2000, the population figures for India were one billion, whereas in China, the population crossed 1.25 billion. Additionally, in the year 2030, the two countries, India and China, were at the same level in terms of population growth rate, with it being nearly about 1.44 billion.

Turning to 2050, the population growth between the two countries saw India surpassing China and surging to a higher level of up to 1.6 billion, whereas the population growth rate in China was predicted to be 1.4 billion.

To conclude, it seems that the overall population growth rate in India surpasses the population growth rate of China, and India was expected to peak at up to 1.6 billion.

IMPROVED VERSION

The provided line graph illustrates the population figures for India and China from the year 2000, projecting their anticipated growth rates until 2050.

With regard to India, its population witnessed a dramatic increase in growth rate from 2000 to 2050. In 2000, India's population stood at one billion, surpassing China's population of 1.25 billion. Furthermore, by 2030, India and China were almost on par in terms of population growth rate, reaching approximately 1.44 billion inhabitants.

Looking ahead to 2050, India's population growth surpassed China, reaching a higher level of 1.6 billion, while China's population growth rate was predicted to reach 1.4 billion.

In conclusion, it is evident that India's overall population growth rate surpasses that of China, with India expected to reach a peak of 1.6 billion inhabitants.

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