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Task-2

Let's Learn from Others' Mistakes

Common Errors 

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Source: Mr Nasir Hussain 11-07-23 MT 09

Original Text

Many ways the people around the world would not be the same without healthy body. 

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Corrected version:


In many ways, the people around the world would not be the same without a healthy body.

Explanation: 

Missing article before "healthy body." 

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Improved version:

The significance of a healthy body cannot be understated in the lives of individuals worldwide.

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Original Text

Unhealthy body will leads to cause numinous diseases.

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Corrected version:

An unhealthy body will lead to numerous diseases. 


Explanation: 

Verb agreement error - "body will leads."

Typo - "numinous" should be "numerous." 

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Improved version:

An unhealthy body can pave the way for various ailments. 

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Original Text

Human beings are not aware about it's effects, it may leads to crucial diseases. 

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Human beings are not aware of its effects; it may lead to crucial diseases.


Explanation: 


Possessive pronoun error - "it's" should be "its."

Verb agreement error - "it may leads."

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Improved version:

Many individuals remain unaware of the detrimental effects it can have, potentially leading to severe health conditions.

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Original Text

One should be available about it so they can be prevented. 

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Corrected version:

One should be aware of it so they can be prevented.

Explanation: 


Incorrect word usage - "available" should be "aware." 

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Improved version:

It is imperative to be knowledgeable about these effects to take preventive measures.

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Original Text

The majority of people are unhealthy because of their routine, they bother more about their work and less about their physics. 

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Corrected version:

The majority of people are unhealthy because of their routine, they bother more about their work and less about their physical health.

Explanation: 


Incorrect word usage - "physics" should be "physical health." 

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The majority of individuals suffer from poor health due to their demanding lifestyles, where work takes precedence over personal fitness.

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Original Text

The Reliance of transportation made them lazy and lethargic. 

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Corrected version:

The reliance of transportation made them lazy and lethargic. 


Explanation: 


Capitalization error - "Reliance" should be "The reliance." 

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Improved version:

The dependence on transportation has fostered a sedentary lifestyle, inducing a state of inactivity and sluggishness.

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Original Text

This problem majorly imeges from the access uses of smart gadgets like mobile phones and LED screens etc. 

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This problem mainly emerges from the excessive use of smart gadgets like mobile phones and LED screens, etc.


Explanation: 


Spelling error - "imeges" should be "emerges."

Incorrect word usage - "access uses" should be "excessive use."

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This issue primarily arises from the overuse of smart devices, such as mobile phones and LED screens.

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Original Text

They divert our mind from essential task, which wastes our precious time. 

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Corrected version:

They divert our minds from essential tasks, which waste our precious time.


Explanation: 


Subject-verb agreement error - "They divert our mind." 

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These distractions divert our attention from crucial tasks, consequently squandering our valuable time. 

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Original Text

They just not only waste are time but also disturb our schedule.

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Corrected version:

They not only waste our time but also disturb our schedule.


Explanation: 


Incorrect word usage - "just not only" should be "not only."

Typo - "are" should be "our."

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Improved version:

Moreover, they not only consume our time but also disrupt our daily routines.

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Original Text

Moreover, citizens may have a proper exercise schedule, they must not get away from their essential task. 

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Corrected version:

Moreover, citizens may have a proper exercise schedule, they must not get away from their essential tasks. 


Explanation: 


Incorrect word usage - "essential task" should be "essential tasks." 

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Improved version:

Individuals should adhere to a structured exercise regimen without neglecting their core responsibilities. 

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Original Text

There are also concerns about, the diet which should be clean and green. 

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Corrected version:

There are also concerns about the diet, which should be clean and green.

Explanation: 

Incorrect punctuation - unnecessary comma after "about." 

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Furthermore, dietary concerns revolve around the importance of consuming wholesome and environmentally friendly food.

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Deit must not include unhealthy eatable and drinks.

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Diet must not include unhealthy edibles and drinks. 


Explanation: 


Spelling error - "Deit" should be "Diet."

Incorrect word usage - "eatable" should be "edible."

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Improved version:

The diet should exclude any unhealthy food and beverages. 

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Original Text

With a little bit of discipline on dining table, we can deal with this situation.

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Corrected version:

With a little bit of discipline at the dining table, we can deal with this situation.


Explanation: 


Incorrect word usage - "on dining table" should be "at the dining table."

Missing article - "a little bit of discipline."

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Improved version:

By incorporating a modest amount of discipline during meal times, we can effectively address this issue.

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Original Text

One should avoid eating fat ingredients, which may result to obesity. 

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Corrected version:

One should avoid eating fat ingredients, which may result in obesity.

Explanation: 

Incorrect preposition - "result to" should be "result in." 

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Improved version:

It is advisable to refrain from consuming fatty ingredients as they can contribute to the development of obesity.

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Original Text

The issue of overweight is more found in urbanites, rather than villagers, the gap may caused by the agriculture work which keeps them fit.

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Corrected version:

The issue of overweight is more common in urbanites rather than villagers; the gap may be caused by the agricultural work which keeps them fit.


Explanation: 


Incorrect word usage - "is more found" should be "is more common."

Missing verb - "the gap may caused" should be "the gap may be caused."

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Improved version:

Overweight concerns are more prevalent among urban dwellers compared to villagers, potentially influenced by the physical exertion involved in agricultural labor that helps villagers maintain their fitness levels.

Source: Mr Nasir Hussain 11-07-23 MT 09

Original Text!

   Many ways the people around the world would not be the same without healthy body. Unhealthy body will leads to cause numinous diseases. Human beings are not aware about it's effects, it may leads to crucial diseases. One should be available about it so they can be prevented. 

Nowadays, a lot of people are suffering from obesity. The majority of people are unhealthy because of their routine, they bother more about their work and less about their physics. The Reliance of transportation made them lazy and lethargic. This problem majorly imeges from the access uses of smart gadgets like mobile phones and LED screens etc. They divert our mind from essential task, which wastes our precious time. They just not only waste are time but also disturb our schedule.

Moreover, citizens may have a proper exercise schedule, they must not get away from their essential task. There are also concerns about, the diet which should be clean and green. Deit must not include unhealthy eatable and drinks. With a little bit of discipline on dining table, we can deal with this situation. One should avoid eating fat ingredients, which may result to obesity. The issue of overweight is more found in urbanites, rather than villagers, the gap may caused by the agriculture work which keeps them fit.

On the whole, our surroundings our surroundings are witnessed by overweight bodies, we must take care about it. This can be dealt with exercise and strictness. Efforts should be made at both individual and social level to promote the significance of healthy body.

Corrected!

  In many ways, people around the world would not be the same without a healthy body. Unhealthy bodies will lead to numinous diseases. Human beings are not aware of its effects, which may lead to crucial diseases. One should be available about it so they can be prevented.

Nowadays, a lot of people are suffering from obesity. The majority of people are unhealthy because of their routine; they worry more about their work and less about their physics. The dependence on transportation made them lazy and lethargic. This problem stems primarily from the access to smart gadgets like mobile phones, LED screens, etc. They divert our mind from essential tasks, which wastes our precious time. They not only waste our time but also disturb our schedule.

Moreover, while citizens may have a proper exercise schedule, they must not get away from their essential tasks. There are also concerns about the diet, which should be clean and green. It must not include unhealthy foods and drinks. With a little bit of discipline at the dining table, we can deal with this situation. One should avoid eating fattening ingredients, which may result in obesity. The issue of overweight is more prevalent among urbanites than among villagers; the gap may be caused by the agriculture work that keeps them fit.

On the whole, our surroundings are witnessed by overweight bodies, so we must take care about them. This can be dealt with through exercise and strictness. Efforts should be made at the individual and social levels to promote the significance of a healthy body.

IMPROVED VERSION

 The significance of maintaining a healthy body cannot be overstated as it greatly impacts individuals around the world. A sound physical condition is crucial in preventing the onset of numerous diseases. However, a lack of awareness among people about the adverse effects of an unhealthy lifestyle often leads to the development of severe ailments. It is imperative that individuals educate themselves on these effects to take proactive measures towards prevention.

  In the modern era, a considerable number of people are grappling with the issue of obesity. This can largely be attributed to the unhealthy lifestyle choices resulting from prioritizing work commitments over personal well-being. Sedentary habits stemming from an overreliance on transportation have contributed to an increase in laziness and lethargy among individuals. Additionally, excessive use of smart gadgets such as mobile phones and LED screens has not only diverted our attention from essential tasks but has also consumed a significant amount of our valuable time.

  To address these concerns, individuals should establish a well-rounded exercise routine and remain committed to essential responsibilities. Furthermore, maintaining a clean and green diet is of utmost importance. It is crucial to exclude unhealthy food and beverages from our dietary choices. By embracing discipline and mindfulness at the dining table, we can effectively tackle this situation. Avoiding the consumption of fatty ingredients is particularly vital as they are closely linked to the development of obesity.

   Interestingly, the issue of overweight tends to be more prevalent in urban areas compared to rural regions. This discrepancy may be attributed to the physically demanding nature of agricultural work that keeps villagers in better shape. However, it is crucial to note that the rise in urbanization has led to a decline in physical activity, thereby contributing to weight-related issues.

  In conclusion, maintaining a healthy body is paramount for individuals worldwide. Awareness about the detrimental effects of an unhealthy lifestyle, along with the adoption of proper exercise routines and clean eating habits, can significantly contribute to preventing various diseases. Moreover, understanding the disparities between urban and rural areas regarding overweight concerns allows for targeted interventions to promote healthier lifestyles among all population segments.

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