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Task-2

Let's Learn from Others' Mistakes

Common Errors 

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Source: Mr Damanpreet Singh 11-07-23 MT 21

Original Text

In many ways, world would not be same without news. 

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Corrected version:


In many ways, the world would not be the same without news. 

Explanation: 

Missing article before "world", and "same".

Improved

Improved version:

In many ways, news plays an indispensable role in shaping our world. 

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Original Text

Well there are plethora of mediums to know about news, all thought many people read news on the internet.

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Corrected version:

Well, there is a plethora of mediums to know about news, although many people read news on the internet. 


Explanation: 


Missing article before "plethora". 

Incorrect usage of "all thought". Correction: Although many people read news on the internet. 

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Improved version:

Well, while there are various mediums available to access news, it is noteworthy that a significant number of individuals opt for online news consumption. 

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Original Text

Will newspaper will remain a major source of news?

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Corrected version:

Will newspapers remain a major source of news? 


Explanation: 


Repetition of "will". 

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Improved version:

However, the question arises: will newspapers continue to serve as a primary source of news?

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Original Text

From my viewpoint, newspaper will remain the most important source of news.

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Corrected version:

From my viewpoint, newspapers will remain the most important source of news.

Explanation: 


Missing article before "newspaper". 

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Improved version:

From my vantage point, newspapers will undoubtedly retain their status as the most significant source of news. 

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Original Text

This habit comes with many disadvantages like to follow this trend, we need smartphones which allow us to read news online, while they are very expensive . 

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Corrected version:

This habit comes with many disadvantages, such as the need for smartphones that allow us to read news online, which can be very expensive.


Explanation: 


Incorrect usage of "like to". 

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Improved version:

Moreover, despite the growing popularity of accessing news through smartphones, there are certain drawbacks associated with this habit. For instance, one must invest in expensive smartphones to stay up to date with the latest news online. 

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Original Text

Getting information from newspaper is a cheap and convenient way. 

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Corrected version:

Getting information from newspapers is a cheap and convenient way. 


Explanation: 


Missing article before "newspaper". 

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Improved version:

In stark contrast, acquiring information through newspapers proves to be a cost-effective and convenient approach. 

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Original Text

It is also beneficial for eyes because most of the people in India read news in the morning and it is the universal truth that if we see any type of screen in the morning, it makes double harm to our eyes due to that the chances of eyes disorder get increased. 

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Corrected version:

It is also beneficial for the eyes because most people in India read news in the morning, and it is a universal truth that looking at any type of screen in the morning can double harm our eyes, increasing the chances of eye disorders.

Explanation: 


Incorrect usage of "beneficial for eyes". 

Incorrect word order and grammar. 

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Additionally, reading newspapers benefits our eyes, especially considering that many individuals in India engage in this practice during the morning hours. It is universally acknowledged that exposing our eyes to screens in the early morning can pose a double threat, increasing the likelihood of developing eye-related disorders.

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Original Text

On the flip side, if the demand for newspaper will increase so it will comes with many economical advantages like increase in GDP (Gross Domestic Product )and it may also increase the job opportunities, but as well as it comes with one demerit that for the production of paper we need wood, which leads to deforestation. 

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Corrected version:

On the flip side, if the demand for newspapers increases, it will come with many economic advantages, such as an increase in GDP (Gross Domestic Product) and job opportunities. However, it also comes with one demerit: for the production of paper, we need wood, which leads to deforestation. 


Explanation: 


Incorrect usage of "newspaper will increase so it will comes". 

Incorrect word order and grammar. 

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On the other hand, an upsurge in the demand for newspapers can yield several economic advantages, including a boost in Gross Domestic Product (GDP) and the creation of more employment opportunities. Nonetheless, it is essential to acknowledge one drawback: paper production necessitates the use of wood, contributing to the concerning issue of deforestation. 

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Original Text

Newspaper will remain the most important source of news as its advantages of reading newspaper are more than merits of reading news online. 

Corrected

Corrected version:

Newspapers will remain the most important source of news as the advantages of reading newspapers outweigh the merits of reading news online. 


Explanation: 


Repetition of "newspaper" and incorrect word order. 

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Improved version:

In conclusion, from my standpoint, newspapers will undoubtedly continue to hold their position as the most crucial source of news. The advantages of reading newspapers outweigh the benefits of accessing news online. 

Source: Mr Damanpreet Singh 11-07-23 MT 21

Original Text!

   In many ways, world would not be same without news. Well there are plethora of mediums to know about news, all thought many people read news on the internet. Will newspaper will remain a major source of news? The answer to this question is yes. From my viewpoint, newspaper will remain the most important source of news.

To begin with, reading news in the present time is paramount because it keeps us up to date about our local and national events, Well many people are reading news from their phones. This habit comes with many disadvantages like to follow this trend, we need smartphones which allow us to read news online, while they are very expensive . Getting information from newspaper is a cheap and convenient way. It is also beneficial for eyes because most of the people in India read news in the morning and it is the universal truth that if we see any type of screen in the morning, it makes double harm to our eyes due to that the chances of eyes disorder get increased. On the flip side, if the demand for newspaper will increase so it will comes with many economical advantages like increase in GDP (Gross Domestic Product )and it may also increase the job opportunities, but as well as it comes with one demerit that for the production of paper we need wood, which leads to deforestation.

To sum up, from my eye. Newspaper will remain the most important source of news as its advantages of reading newspaper are more than merits of reading news online.

Corrected!

    In many ways, the world would not be the same without news. Well, there are a plethora of mediums to learn about news, and many people read news on the internet. Will newspapers remain a major source of news? The answer to this question is yes. From my viewpoint, the newspaper will remain the most important source of news.
       To begin with, reading news in the present time is paramount because it keeps us up-to-date about our local and national events. Well, many people are reading the news on their phones. This habit comes with many disadvantages, like the fact that to follow this trend, we need smartphones, which allow us to read news online, but they are very expensive. Getting information from the newspaper is a cheap and convenient way. It is also beneficial for the eyes because most people in India read news in the morning, and it is a universal truth that if we see any type of screen in the morning, it does double harm to our eyes. Due to that, the chances of developing an eye disorder increase. On the flip side, if the demand for newspapers increases, it will come with many economic advantages, like an increase in GDP (Gross Domestic product), and it may also increase job opportunities, but it also comes with one demerit: for the production of paper, we need wood, which leads to deforestation.
   To sum up, in my opinion, newspapers will remain the most important source of news, as the advantages of reading newspapers outweigh the merits of reading news online.

IMPROVED VERSION

 News plays a vital role in shaping our world and keeping us informed. While there are multiple platforms to access news, the question remains: Will newspapers continue to be a significant source of news? In this essay, we will explore the importance of newspapers as a reliable and accessible medium for news consumption.

To begin with, staying informed about current events holds great significance as it allows us to understand and engage with our local and national affairs. Newspapers have long been a primary source of news, providing comprehensive coverage of a wide range of topics. Their in-depth reporting and analysis enable readers to gain a deeper understanding of complex issues that shape our society.

Despite the growing popularity of online news consumption, newspapers still hold unique advantages. Many individuals now rely on smartphones to access news, but this habit has certain drawbacks. For instance, accessing news online often requires expensive smartphones and reliable internet connections, which may not be accessible to everyone. In contrast, newspapers offer a cost-effective and convenient way to obtain information, requiring only a printed copy and sufficient lighting.

Moreover, reading newspapers has additional benefits, particularly for our eye health. It is a widely acknowledged fact that exposure to screens, such as smartphones and computers, early in the morning can have adverse effects on our eyes. In contrast, reading a physical newspaper allows for a more relaxed and comfortable reading experience, reducing the strain on our eyes and minimizing the risk of eye-related disorders.

On the economic front, the demand for newspapers can have positive implications. An increased demand for newspapers leads to growth in the publishing industry, contributing to the Gross Domestic Product (GDP) and creating job opportunities. This economic boost benefits not only the newspaper industry but also the overall economy, fostering growth and stability.

In conclusion, newspapers continue to play a crucial role as a reliable and accessible source of news. Their comprehensive coverage, cost-effectiveness, and benefits for eye health make them a preferred choice for many readers. While online news consumption is on the rise, newspapers offer unique advantages that cannot be easily replicated. Therefore, newspapers will remain an important source of news, contributing to an informed and engaged society.

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