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Task-1
Let's Learn from Others' Mistakes
Common Errors
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Source: Mr Aryan Kapoor 17-07-23 MT 11
Original Text
The two maps provide an overview of road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. As can be seen from the maps, A city Hospital had enhanced and expanded.
Corrected
Corrected version:
The two maps provide an overview of road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. It can be seen from the maps, a city hospital had enhanced and expanded.
Improved
Improved version:
The two maps provide an overview of road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. It is evident from the maps that the city hospital underwent significant enhancements and expansions during this period.
2
Original Text
In 2007, there were total six bus stops at the Hospital Road, but in 2010, bus station was built in the West of the hospital road.
Corrected
Corrected version:
In 2007, there were a total of six bus stops at the Hospital Road, but in 2010, a bus station was built in the West of the hospital road.
Explanation:
The word "total" should be placed before the number "six" to indicate the total number of bus stops.
Improved
Improved version:
In 2007, there were a total of six bus stops along Hospital Road. However, in 2010, a new bus station was constructed to the west of the hospital road, providing improved access for commuters.
3
Original Text
There was a single car park for both staff as well as public in 2007, after developments there were two different parking spaces, one for public that was in the East of the hospital and car park for staff did not changed in 2010.
Corrected
Corrected version:
There was a single car park for both staff and the public in 2007. After developments, there were two different parking spaces: one for the public in the East of the hospital, and the car park for staff did not change in 2010.
Explanation:
The phrase "car park for staff did not changed" is grammatically incorrect. It should be "car park for staff did not change".
Improved
Improved version:
Initially, there was a single car park that served both the hospital staff and the public in 2007. Following the developments, two separate parking spaces were created. The public parking area was located to the east of the hospital, while the staff car park remained unchanged in 2010.
4
Original Text
In addition, the three major changes in a city Hospital throughout the period, three roundabouts were built, the first one was in the front, second one was in the centre of five Road and last was outside a city hospital in the eastern corner.
Corrected
Corrected version:
In addition, there were three major changes in a city hospital throughout the period. Three roundabouts were built: the first one was in the front, the second one was in the centre of five roads, and the last one was outside a city hospital in the eastern corner.
Explanation:
The phrase "the three major changes in a city Hospital throughout the period" is grammatically incorrect. It should be "the three major changes in a city hospital throughout the period".
Improved
Improved version:
Furthermore, three roundabouts were constructed during this period, contributing to improved traffic flow around the city hospital. The first roundabout was built in the front, the second one was positioned in the center of five roads, and the last one was located outside the hospital in the eastern corner.
5
Original Text
However, the place of cities Hospital had not changed.
Corrected
Corrected version:
However, the place of the city hospital had not changed.
Explanation:
The word "cities" should be singular as it refers to a specific city hospital.
Improved
Improved version:
Despite these changes, the physical location of the city hospital remained unchanged throughout the period.
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Original Text
In general, the two maps illustrate how a city Hospital has evaluated from 2007 to 2010. Hospital undergone many changes and developments, the place of the city Hospital remained the same.
Corrected
Corrected version:
In general, the two maps illustrate how a city hospital has evolved from 2007 to 2010. The hospital underwent many changes and developments, but the place of the city hospital remained the same.
Explanation:
The word "Hospital" should be capitalized as "hospital". The word "Hospital" should be capitalized as "hospital". The verb "undergone" should be in the past tense form "underwent".
Improved
Improved version:
In summary, the two maps illustrate the evolution of a city hospital from 2007 to 2010. The hospital underwent various improvements and developments, including the construction of a new bus station, the creation of separate parking spaces, and the addition of three roundabouts. However, the actual location of the hospital remained constant.
Source: Mr Aryan Kapoor 17-07-23 MT 11
Original Text!
The two maps provide an overview of road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
As can be seen from the maps, A city Hospital had enhanced and expanded. In 2007, there were total six bus stops at the Hospital Road, but in 2010, bus station was built in the West of the hospital road. There was a single car park for both staff as well as public in 2007, after developments there were two different parking spaces, one for public that was in the East of the hospital and car park for staff did not changed in 2010. In addition, the three major changes in a city Hospital throughout the period, three roundabouts were built, the first one was in the front, second one was in the centre of five Road and last was outside a city hospital in the eastern corner. However, the place of cities Hospital had not changed.
In general, the two maps illustrate how a city Hospital has evaluated from 2007 to 2010. Hospital undergone many changes and developments, the place of the city Hospital remained the same.
Corrected!
The two maps provide an overview of road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. As can be seen from the maps, the city hospital had been enhanced and expanded.
In 2007, there were a total of six bus stops on Hospital Road, but in 2010, a bus station was built to the west of the hospital road. There was a single car park for both staff and the public in 2007. After developments, there were two different parking spaces, one for the public located in the east of the hospital, and the staff car park remained unchanged in 2010. In addition, there were three major changes in the city hospital throughout the period. Three roundabouts were built, with the first one in the front, the second one in the center of the five roads, and the last one outside the city hospital in the eastern corner. However, the location of the city hospital did not change.
In general, the two maps illustrate how the city hospital evolved from 2007 to 2010. The hospital underwent many changes and developments, but its location remained the same.
IMPROVED VERSION
The two maps provide an overview of road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. It is evident from the maps that the city hospital underwent significant enhancements and expansions during this period.
In 2007, there were a total of six bus stops along Hospital Road. However, in 2010, a new bus station was constructed to the west of the hospital road, leading to improved accessibility for commuters. Initially, there was a single car park that served both the hospital staff and the public in 2007. Subsequently, as part of the developments, two separate parking spaces were created. The public parking area was situated to the east of the hospital, while the staff car park remained unchanged in 2010.
Moreover, three roundabouts were built, contributing to improved traffic flow around the city hospital. The first roundabout was constructed in the front, followed by the second one in the center of five roads, and the last one outside the hospital in the eastern corner. Despite these changes, the physical location of the city hospital remained unaltered throughout the period.
In conclusion, the two maps illustrate the evolution of a city hospital from 2007 to 2010. The hospital witnessed significant improvements and developments, including the construction of a new bus station, the creation of separate parking spaces, and the addition of three roundabouts. However, the actual location of the hospital remained constant.
Key Phrases and Vocabulary
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car park
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public
parking spaces
roundabouts
developments
physical location
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significant enhancements
improved accessibility
improved traffic flow
witnessed significant improvements and developments
construction
creation
remained unchanged
evolution