Corrected version:

The following table depicts the outcomes of a survey that sampled one lakh people about their overseas travel and the reasons for their travel from 1994 to 1998.

• • The phrase "sample a specimen" is redundant. Just say "sample."

  • The phrase "why did travel" should be "why they traveled."

  • The phrase "for the period 1994-98" should be "from 1994 to 1998."

Improved version:

The following table shows the results of a survey of one lakh people about their overseas travel from 1994 to 1998, including the reasons for their travel.

Corrected version:

 The chart illustrates that UK residents' travel abroad for holidays has been continuously increasing, by approximately 5000 people over a period of 5 years.

• The phrase "the native of United Kingdom" should be "UK residents."

• The phrase "went to the abroad" should be "traveled abroad."

• The word "is" should be "has been."

• The phrase "during the span of 5 year" should be "over a period of 5 years."

Improved version:

The chart shows that the number of UK residents traveling abroad for holidays has increased by approximately 5,000 people each year over the past 5 years.

Corrected version:

It was observed that the number of business tours by English citizens showed a wild fluctuation from 1995 to 1997. The number gradually increased to 8,249 in 1995, then declined to 3,639 the following year.

• The word "observe" should be "observed."

• The phrase "the citizen of England" should be "English citizens."

• The phrase "shows the wild fluctuation" should be "showed a wild fluctuation."

• The word "gradually increases" should be "gradually increased."

• The phrase "then next year declines to 3639" should be "and then declined to 3,639 the following year."

Improved version:

The number of business tours by English citizens fluctuated wildly from 1995 to 1997. The number gradually increased to 8,249 in 1995, then declined to 3,639 the following year. 

Corrected version:

It was also observed that there were drastic changes in the number of UK residents traveling for other reasons. The number increased by 10,034 in one year, then decreased by the same amount the following year.

• The word "be also" should be "also be."

• The phrase "the drastic changes occur" should be "there were drastic changes."

• The phrase "in the number of people travelling from UK for other reasons" should be "in the number of UK residents traveling for other reasons."

• The word "is" should be "was."

• The phrase "then next year also decreased by the same pase" should be "and then decreased by the same amount the following year."

Improved version:

The number of UK residents traveling for other reasons fluctuated drastically. The number increased by 10,034 in one year, then decreased by the same amount the following year.