IELTS Writing Task 2 

Sample Answer 2

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                 There is little room for doubt that the activities held at the Olympic Games serve a critical role in preserving global peace, and they do so by demonstrating patriotism in a positive light. An important part of establishing strong ties with other nations is playing in international competitions. Although there are significant reasons for and against broadcasting the Olympic Games as a symbol of patriotism, the matter remains contentious since it raises different viewpoints.

                As you can see, there are several benefits to playing in international competitions. An important benefit is that being close to other nations means that players treat their opponents' teams with respect and sportsmanship, which undeniably promotes patriotism. They fail to see that there is a kind of prejudice that occurs between many cultures and traditions, and this further undermines peace on the globe. The second benefit is that athletes' good behaviour increases, and thus reduces continuing friction between countries, which is beneficial for the growth and development of a country. Because of this, international games are more popular than they have ever been.

                 It is true that more and more individuals cheer for their own teams and dislike other teams, which has a negative impact on the general public's unity. In these instances, players want to get under the skin of other teams when they are out of play or they are not seeing any improvement in their game scores, thus adding fuel to the fire.

               After studying all of the evidence, it seems to me that one of the major reasons for preserving global peace is by playing popular games.

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Sample Answer 3

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                                  There is little room for doubt that sports are very important for our physical as well as mental health. The number of international sports events has been increased in the past few years. As a result, sports are gaining a great deal of popularity among youngsters. It is insisted that international sporting occasions are a great help in easing international tensions. I agree with the viewpoint that this may help. However, I also believe sometimes these sports events cause conflict between two nations.

                            Certainly, there are many reasons why sports events are one of the safest ways to release patriotic emotions. Firstly, sportsmen from different nations come together on the same platform. In addition, they show respect and sportsmanship towards their opponents. These types of gestures play a vital role in easing tension between two nations. A survey, done by "The world Sports organisation", has found that because of the 2003 Olympics, Pakistan and Afghanistan began trading again with each other on a large scale.

                                      On the other hand, this can be counter-productive sometimes. First of all, there are many incidents in the past where a cricket match caused a lot of tension between two groups. For instance, India-Pakistan cricket matches have always been one of the biggest reasons for their rivalry. Furthermore, if a national player misbehaves with his opponent in the field, this may cause controversy and dispute, so players should behave properly while playing for their country.

                            To conclude, one should respect their own country, but in this process, they should not disrespect other countries. Sportsmanship should be represented on and off the field by players.

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Sample Answer 4

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                                 There is little question that sports are critical to preserving international peace and demonstrating nationalism.

                                        In recent years, the number of sporting events has risen. As a result, they are rapidly gaining popularity among children. It has been observed that these events contribute significantly to the de-escalation of hostilities among nations. I wholeheartedly concur with this assessment. However, I believe that these occurrences occasionally result in confrontations between the athletes and supporters of contesting countries.

                                      Indeed, there are several reasons why attending sporting events is one of the most secure ways to cultivate patriotism. To begin with, athletes of different nationalities participate on the same stage. Second, they demonstrate mutual respect and sportsmanship. As a result, these sorts of gestures are critical in relieving tensions between the participants. According to a poll done by "The Sports Organisation of India," India and China began trading on a significant scale, following the 2010 Commonwealth Games.

                                 However, it is not always effective. The most concerning occurrence from the past is a cricket match that generated considerable amount of tension between the two nations. It is a known fact that India and Pakistan have been bitter rivals for decades. Additionally, if a national player behaves inappropriately on the pitch with an opponent, this may spark controversy and conflict between them. As a result, many experts argue that athletes should be adequately reprimanded for failing to manage their emotions on the field, as this might have a detrimental effect on their respective nations' reputations.

                             To conclude, while these sports appear to be a simple way to demonstrate patriotism, athletes need to be educated to regulate their emotions both on and off the field.

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