IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Answer

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70. The chart shows the fluctuations in the numbers of international students attending the Sydney International Language Centre in 2001. 


Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

The chart shows the fluctuations in the numbers of international students attending the Sydney International Language Centre in 2001. 

Sample Answer 1

The graph presents information regarding the enrollment of international students at the International Language Centre of Sydney in 2001.

The data reveals that there was a consistent level of student attendance at the centre throughout the months of January and February, which was subsequently followed by a decrease in attendance. However, the attendance numbers experienced a significant increase, reaching a peak of 190 students between the months of March and July. 

Following this, there was a decline to a value of 140 in the month of August, which was then succeeded by a consistent upward trend. Over the course of the past five months, the numerical value has reached a total of 180.

In general, the student population exhibited variability over the course of the year, oscillating between 120 and 190 individuals. The months of January, February, July, and December exhibited the highest levels of attendance, while March and September demonstrated the lowest levels. 

In brief, there was an observable positive trajectory in the enrollment figures of students at the International Language Centre of Sydney during the year 2001.

Key Vocabulary and Phrases:

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steady rise

attendance

upward trend

fluctuation

The chart shows the fluctuations in the numbers of international students attending the Sydney International Language Centre in 2001. 

Sample Answer 2

Band 5

                     The graph gives data about the number of foreign students joining the International Language Centre of Sydney in 2001.

                       We can see that the number of students attending the Centre remained constant between January and February. After that, it went down before rising to 190, from March to July. Subsequently, it bounced back to 140 in August, followed by a steady rise. In the last five months, the number reached 180.

                   Overall, the number of students did not remain steady throughout the year. Sometimes their numbers increase, and sometimes their numbers decrease. However, it hovered around 120-190.

                    It can be seen that the highest number of students attended class in January, February, July and December. The minimum number of students joined in March and September.

                    In summary, it was an upward trend.

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