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84. Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefit that it will replace face - to - face education. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both view and give your opinion. 

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                                       There is little room for doubt that the need for obtaining education in a good manner is paramount. The issue of whether digital education will take the place of traditional ones is controversial, as there are strong arguments for and against it.

                                      It is considered by many people that acquiring education through an online mode saves time, as almost everyone knows that time is a precious commodity, and it is necessary to utilise it in the right way. For example, the Corona Virus, a pandemic, which led to educational institutions completely closing for the last year. As a consequence, the education system was affected badly. However, online classes commenced in terms of children's future security. Thus, online-education is gaining popularity across the world today. Another advantage to this is that gathering information and learning online is inexpensive because there are many social websites that offer education for free, such as Youtube, which is one of the popular video sites on the internet, where people gain education from excellent teachers.

                                    Many people argue that traditional learning offers teacher-led learning, since the students who become toppers in their fields are entirely guided by their teachers in their workplaces. For instance, Akanksha Puri, who topped in NEET (2020), told others that she was able to attain such a high score because she maintained interaction with the teachers (face-to-face). One advantage to learning in a traditional way is that people who regularly visit their workplaces and gain a great deal of knowledge from their elders always succeed in their life. So, it is impossible that the traditional education system will be replaced. Thus, this system takes a person to a certain height where success reaches them.

                  To conclude, it seems to me that in times to come, digital learning will replace traditional learning.

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