IELTS Writing Task

Sample Answer

Band 7+ 

10. Some people believe that we have too many choices these days. 

To what extent do you agree or disagree?


     Sample Answer 1

                             In today's society, there is a widespread belief that we face an insurmountable number of options. This essay examines the degree to which I concur or disagree with this premise, analysing the benefits and drawbacks of having a multitude of options in various aspects of life.

There are numerous advantages to having numerous options. First, it enables people to make decisions based on their preferences and requirements. It provides a perception of control and individualization in a variety of areas, including career paths, education, and consumer goods. Secondly, a vast selection of options promotes healthy competition among businesses, which results in innovation and enhanced quality. In addition, having options can spark creativity and encourage individuals to investigate new opportunities, resulting in personal development and growth.

However, excessive options can also have adverse effects. Initially, the plethora of options can be overpowering and result in paralysis of the will. The fear of making the incorrect decision or missing out on something greater can impede decision-making and cause anxiety. Moreover, an overemphasis on options can result in disappointment and regret if the option selected falls short of expectations. In addition, the constant need to evaluate and contrast multiple options can occupy valuable time and mental energy, detracting from other significant endeavours.

In conclusion, despite the fact that having a variety of options provides empowerment, personalization, and encourages competition and innovation, I believe there is a point at which having too many options becomes detrimental. The potential disadvantages of decision paralysis, dissatisfaction, and squandered time must not be neglected. It is essential to achieve a balance between complexity and simplicity. It is essential to recognise and prioritise our own preferences and values, to be mindful of the decisions we make, and to prioritise the quality rather than the quantity of available options. By doing so, we can navigate the multitude of options more effectively and improve our overall happiness and contentment.

Important Vocabulary and Phrases

Widespread belief

Insurmountable number of options

Degree to which I concur or disagree

Benefits and drawbacks

Multitude of options

Preferences and requirements

Perception of control and individualization

Career paths, education, consumer goods

Healthy competition

Innovation and enhanced quality

Spark creativity

Investigate new opportunities

Personal development and growth

Adverse effects

Paralysis of the will

Fear of making the incorrect decision

Missing out on something greater

Impede decision-making

Overemphasis on options

Disappointment and regret

Evaluate and contrast multiple options

Occupy valuable time and mental energy

Detract from other significant endeavors

Balance between complexity and simplicity

Prioritize preferences and values

Mindful of decisions

Quality rather than quantity

Navigate the multitude of options

Improve overall happiness and contentment

10. Some people believe that we have too many choices these days. T

To what extent do you agree or disagree?


     Sample Answer 2

Band 7.5

                We are living in an era in which the world is continually changing and developing. Each new technique presents a plethora of possibilities, making it difficult for consumers to make a definitive decision. However, I believe that options have more advantages than disadvantages, particularly when it comes to consumerism and education, and so I favor them.

              To begin with, students now have a broader selection of disciplines to select from, allowing them to pursue their passions and interests. Historically, education was restricted in terms of accessibility in some locations, most notably distant locations. Additionally, pupils were not given as many options as they are in today's school system. This expansion is a result of advancements in technology, which enables students to access education in a variety of modes: online, distance learning, weekend courses, evening schools, and unique ability schools, to name a few. With the proliferation of the internet, students' reliance on books has also been reduced to a minimum.

           Consumers have much to gain from this era of change. You may simply get whatever you want, owing to online shopping, enabling one to buy any item from any corner of the world. Besides availability, they are also less expensive, which makes them more accessible to the middle class. Additionally, in the past, individuals could only watch a limited number of stations on television. Fortunately, there are now a variety of channels, websites, and films that engage people.

          To conclude, those born nowadays are rather fortunate since they have several opportunities and resources at their disposal.

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10. Some people believe that we have too many choices these days. 

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

     Sample Answer 3

Band 6.5

                             Without a doubt, the last 15 years have witnessed a greater rise in the variety of products, such as food, clothes, electronic gadgets, and so on, than in the preceding 30 years. I, like many others, believe that, in recent times, several choices are available on the market. The essay will discuss the strong argument in the upcoming paragraphs, along with my opinion.

                        Indeed, having a variety of items has numerous upsides. One of the most significant positives is that people are able to choose the best-quality products. To put it another way, there are several mobile-phone brands, such as Samsung, iPhone, Redmi and Vivo, are available on the market, so people can buy cell phones by selecting the brand on the basis of its specifications, colour and price. Thus, they can get good quality items at a reasonable cost. According to a survey conducted by the Times of India, Jio, an Indian-telecom company, has launched data plans according to customers’ needs, and also provides extra benefits like free-roaming all over India to its prime subscribers.

                               Despite the advantages, there are many disadvantages to choosing products. The first is that people can not decide which products are appropriate for them and face many difficulties while choosing items if there are several options available on the market. For instance, there are several clothing brands, such as Nike, Puma and Adidas, which provide discount coupons and cashback to their regular customers, especially during the festive seasons. Research shows that 70% of compulsive shoppers always remain in a kind of dilemma when they go out shopping and they are not able to find the best product from out of sales.

                          To conclude, it seems to me that having options for products is a positive development because people can find the best items for them.

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10. Some people believe that we have too many choices these days. 

To what extent do you agree or disagree?


     Sample Answer 4

Band 6.5

                       There is no denying that the last 20 years have seen more massive changes in terms of choices than the previous 50 years. Nowadays, people have many options regarding their careers, academics, and entertainment. I firmly believe that these changes have occurred because of the advent of technology and globalisation.

                          First and foremost, students can choose a variety of academic courses on the basis of their interests. Unlike earlier, there were limited courses, and people had to choose from them. Moreover, various modes of education are also available, such as online education, distance learning, evening courses, and so on. People can acquire education anytime and anywhere with the help of the internet. The internet has made the education system more flexible. For example, a recent survey has shown that the majority of students intend to read books on the internet instead of conventional books.

                      Secondly, consumers have many benefits, as they have several options for a single item. In addition to this, online shopping has made it possible for consumers to buy products that are not available in their countries. Furthermore, these products are less expensive. Thus, middle-class people can also afford them. Undoubtedly, it has some drawbacks. This affects the local markets because more and more people have begun to buy from distant locations. This may also affect the traditional items of a particular place.

                       In conclusion, it seems that many choices have numerous benefits because an individual is not restricted to a life that he or she does not want.

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10. Some people believe that we have too many choices these days. 

To what extent do you agree or disagree?


     Sample Answer 5

Band 5.5

                        There is little room for doubt that the need for improvement in society in this modern era is paramount. In this modern time, people have many choices to crack good deals related to education, entertainment, business, awareness, etc. I agree with the statement. Technology has become advanced, and now people are also aware of the quality of products. Many products are purchased and sold through online or offline media, so technology advancement has given us a great deal of choice.

                      Certainly, the cutting edge of technology gives us many more opportunities to expand businesses to their heights. Online businesses give us many choices.

                  Now many educational institutes provide different services at various levels. People can choose an online or offline method of learning. Online learning is autonomous, whereas offline learning is pedagogical.

                     People can adopt online or offline entertainment. Some people choose indoor games to revitalize themselves. However, some people prefer outdoor games to stay healthy and anxiety-free. It is their choice. Many kinds of entertainment and information sources are available at this time, like TV, radios, newspapers, cinema halls, etc., where people can freshen themselves and keep themselves up-to-date with current events.

                       In summary, I can say that nowadays there are many choices available in every field, whether it is related to online or offline. Now, students have the choice of cracking their exams on the internet or in physical presence in the examination hall.

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