IELTS Writing Task 2 

Sample Answer 1

            In today's world, environmental problems are of paramount importance. There are those who say extinction is the most pressing environmental issue of our day, while others point to other problems. In this post, I'll discuss both sides of the debate, contrasting the impact of extinction with that of other environmental issues.

             On one side of the argument, proponents claim that extinction is the most pressing environmental issue since it threatens the survival of entire species. They show the complex biological relationships found in nature and underline the value of biodiversity for its own sake. The extinction of even a single species can have far-reaching effects due to the crucial role that species play in maintaining ecosystems. Furthermore, they claim that the loss of biodiversity endangers future scientific and medical discoveries because many resources and solutions lie within the genetic variety of different species.

             There are, however, many who argue for a broader lens, pointing out that other, more pressing environmental issues also need our immediate attention. Climate change, pollution, deforestation, and the exhaustion of natural resources, they say, have far-reaching and immediate effects on the environment and human well-being. Many species may not make it because of these issues, which threaten entire ecosystems. In addition, they argue that solving these broader issues will indirectly reduce species loss by protecting habitats and improving environmental conditions.

        Overall, people have different views on whether extinction or other environmental issues are the most important problems we face today. Climate change, pollution, and resource depletion are all interconnected, and while the extinction of species brings attention to the importance of biodiversity and its intrinsic value, they also threaten the planet's ability to recover. It is crucial that we strike a balance between these issues if we are to successfully address the environmental disaster we now face. We can work towards a future that is sustainable and protects the complex web of life on Earth if we tackle both the localised extinction of species and the global environmental concerns that threaten them.

Important Phrases and Vocabulary

Environmental issues

Loss of species

Critical environmental challenges

Intrinsic value of biodiversity

Ecological interconnections

Delicate balance of ecosystems

Far-reaching consequences

Genetic diversity

Climate change

Pollution

Deforestation

Resource depletion

Urgent attention

Human well-being

Entire ecosystems

Safeguarding habitats

Improving environmental conditions

Striking a balance

Pressing issues

Ecological imbalances

Tackling the environmental crisis

Sustainable future

Preserving the web of life

6. Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Sample Answer 3

Band 7

            One of the most urgent problems confronting the globe today is the need to conserve particular species of flora, wildlife, and animals, and there is little question about it. Experiencing a range of environmental problems such as ecological imbalance, flash floods, and soil erosion is a divisive topic, with strong arguments both for and against it.

           There are certainly a variety of factors contributing to the extinction of such plant and animal species. Deforestation, animal cruelty, poaching, habitat loss, and extinction are only a few examples. There are a number of individuals that do this for financial gain, which leads to the extermination of animals in the forests. To provide an example, extremely precious ivory is utilised to create jewellery such as bangles and necklaces, despite the fact that it is a rare and expensive material. Plastic, on top of everything else, is the most serious issue. A large number of individuals throw plastic bags of trash into rivers and the sea, causing damage to aquatic life as well as marine environments. As long as we continue to throw plastic trash into the ocean, it is possible that we may lose a significant number of marine animals.

             On the other side, there are many environmental issues to contend with, such as soil erosion, cloud bursting, global warming, and so on. Environmental issues such as global warming are caused by ecological imbalances in the ecosystem, which are created by the increasing use of private cars, the cutting of more and more trees, and industrialization. Another factor contributing to soil erosion is the overabundance of wood harvesting for new homes and industrial facilities. If we continue to chop down trees at an alarming rate, the globe may confront famine and hunger.

             In conclusion, it seems to me that both of these points of view are significant in terms of environmental considerations. If we mix the two, we run the danger of extinction of species and the creation of hazardous living circumstances.

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6. Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.           

Sample Answer 4

Band 6.5   

             There is no doubt that conserving certain species of flora, fauna, and animals is one of the most pressing issues facing the world today. Experiencing a variety of environmental issues, such as ecological imbalance, flash floods, and soil erosion, is a contentious subject, with strong arguments made on both sides.

              Numerous causes undoubtedly contribute to the demise of these plant and animal species. There are many instances, including deforestation, animal abuse, poaching, habitat degradation, and extinction. Numerous people engage in this activity for financial benefit, resulting in the extinction of species in forest habitats. To illustrate, despite its scarcity and high cost, highly valuable ivory is used to make jewellery such as bangles and necklaces. The most severe problem, above all others, is plastic. A great many people dispose of plastic bags of garbage into rivers and the sea, wreaking havoc on aquatic life and marine ecosystems. As long as we continue to discard plastic waste into the ocean, we risk losing a large number of marine creatures.

             On the other hand, many environmental problems must be addressed, including soil erosion, cloud bursts, and global warming. Environmental problems such as global warming are a result of ecological imbalances in the environment, which have been exacerbated by the growing use of private automobiles, the continued clearing of forests, and industrialisation. Another issue that contributes to soil erosion is the over-harvesting of wood for new houses and industrial buildings. If we continue at this pace, the world may face starvation and hunger.

              In conclusion, both of these perspectives seem to me to be important from an environmental standpoint. We risk extinction of species and the development of dangerous living conditions if we combine the two.

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6. Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Sample Answer 5

Band 7.5

              Our planet is perilously close to collapsing as a result of a litany of environmental problems. Opinions differ on which of the many issues should be the primary focus of attention. Some feel that our first concern should be the extinction of certain species of flora and animals, while others believe that other environmental concerns should take precedence. Nonetheless, I believe that no one issue can be deemed primary.

               There are an endless number of environmental conflicts happening all over the world, and although the extinction of plants and animals is one of them, it is by no means the only one that exists. Global warming, ozone depletion, pollution, ocean acidification, and deforestation are among the most serious issues facing the world today. Due to the fact that they are at the root of many species' extinction, these issues are of special importance. Instead of concentrating on the immediate result, we should concentrate on the fundamental source of the issue. This would allow us to save the planet far more swiftly and efficiently.

             The extinction of plant life on the earth's surface is closely linked to the severe climatic changes induced by global warming, which are occurring at an alarming rate. In a similar vein, the extinction of some animal species is a consequence of the loss of their natural habitats caused by deforestation.

            To conclude, although the extinction of certain plant and animal species is an environmental concern that contributes to biodiversity loss, I am convinced that this is mainly a result of other significant environmental problems. We should attempt to address the underlying cause and prioritise other problems that have contributed to our current predicament.

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6. Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Sample Answer 6

Band 7

              Our world is on the verge of collapsing due to a slew of environmental issues. Opinions are split when it comes to deciding which one of the numerous problems is the main concern. Some tend to think that the extinction of some particular species of flora and fauna should be our main concern, while others believe other environmental issues should be regarded as the main ones. However, I incline to the view that no single problem can be considered as the main one.

                There is no end to the number of environmental disputes happening all over the world, and the extinction of plants and animals is one of them, but it is not the only one. There are more important issues than this, such as global warming, ozone depletion, pollution, ocean acidification and deforestation. These issues are more important because they are the root cause of the extinction of many species. If we try to work on the root cause rather than paying attention to the result directly, we can save the planet in a much faster and better way.

               The loss of plants on the earth's surface is a direct result of extreme climatic changes due to global warming. Similarly, the disappearance of particular animal species is an outcome of the destruction of their natural habitats because of deforestation.

            To conclude, the dying out of particular species of plants and animals is an environmental problem causing the loss of biodiversity, but I firmly believe that this is more of a situation caused by other important environmental issues. We should try to work on the root cause and consider other issues more important that led us to this situation.

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6. Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Sample Answer 7

Band 6.5

                                  Many people argue that the extinction of flora and fauna is a matter of grave concern. However, others believe that environmental problems such as global warming, climatic change, flash floods are more detrimental.

                              On the one hand, a number of species are on the edge of extinction, and the loss of a single species may affect an ecological cycle. A few factors are responsible for their extinction, for example, poaching, deforestation, and plastic. Many people kill animals to obtain materials that have rarity value and imaginary medicinal properties. Added to this is deforestation resulting from the expansion of industrialisation and an increasing population that needs more space, which might destroy the livelihood of animals. Furthermore, the use of plastic is deleterious to marine life. This devastates not only aquatic animals but also the aquatic environment.

                                 On the other hand, global warming is one of the major reasons for other environmental problems, which have been brought about by pollution. The increasing number of vehicles and industries has accounted for pollution. Increasing pollution leads to the depletion of the ozone layer, due to which the temperature is rising. As a result, glaciers have begun to melt, resulting in an increase in water level. Moreover, the overcutting of timber has caused soil erosion. Thus, the day is not so far when people die out because of starvation.

                                       In conclusion, ecological problems and flora and fauna are interlinked with each other. If one of them is ignored, humans, as well as animals, will cease to exist.

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